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Fri, 27th Jan 2012 | MatthewCollins | 147 Views, 4 Nods.

Angel without wings

I saw you there long ago in the blowing snow
All covered in white on that long ago night
The storm was sudden and the wind blew hard
You came to shelter in my back yard

Where did you come from this angel without wings

Where you came from I did not know
All I knew was to get you out of the snow
You were so cold that you shivered so much
You sat at the table and asked if you should go

Where did you come from this angle without wings

How could I send you back into the storm
All I wanted to do was keep you warm
Without being forward I asked you if you'd like a bed
With a look of gratitude , thank you I would you said

Where did you come from this angel without wings

We talked for hours into the night then off to separate beds
I couldn't sleep for many hours cos you were on my mind
I knew then what I had to do, I had to make you mine
So for many years I've had you now, a wife and a mum so fine

                


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Wed, 01st Feb 2012
Hey MS expect a visit from a disgruntled ninja
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Wed, 01st Feb 2012
Probably best that you left the finer details out, theres not much that rythmes with Kawasaki Z650, except maybe Nagasaki 1950. Which of course would be a completely different story.
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Tue, 31st Jan 2012
Thank you Mama P
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Tue, 31st Jan 2012
That was definitely fate. Good Luck to you both, stay happy x
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Mon, 30th Jan 2012
Quite bizarre but absolutely true, and I wouldn't change things for the world
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Mon, 30th Jan 2012
What an Unuusual way of meeting a future wife, looks as if it was ment to be
Liked the romantic poem
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Sat, 28th Jan 2012
What happened is that she was riding her Kawasaki Z650 in the snow and she came a cropper and she decided that she'd shelter from the snow in my back garden for a while . Just a few minutes later I arrived home on leave from the navy and saw here standing there and that it's really
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Sat, 28th Jan 2012
You need to write a prequel to this poem, explaining the beginning.
To some, it might sound like a stalker skulking in your back garden, that happened to finally bag her man.

I like it.
Sentimental.
Keep writing.
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Sat, 28th Jan 2012
Yes , my wife, it's how we met
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Sat, 28th Jan 2012
Is this a dedication to someone? Caring.
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